雪中雨:展会沟通邮件
Dear Mr.XX ,
I was so honor to meet you in XX Fair , Thank you for your visiting , So I send this letter to you !
First of all , please let me introduce ourselves , our company is XXXX, specializedin producing XX,Take this chance , I will send you our products photos , if you are interested in our product , please let me know , I will send the details to you !
your timely reply I will so appreciated
with best regards
xx
以上是我参完展会,给客户发的,但是不知道大家有没有更好的,可以帮我看一下! 谢谢!
以下是我写的所谓的开发信,请大家指教!
Dear sirs/madam,
Good day for you !
please pay attentaion to this letter ! I was so honor to send you this letter !
our company is a manuafacturer , specialized in producing XX,such as the XX , which XX is high efficiency , it can improve your products quality and effiency , at time same time , it can save thematerial for you !
our XX has been exported to many countries , I hope we can cooperate with you in the future!we will give youthe high quality and best price !
Take this chance , I send you our XX photos , if you are interested It, please let me know I will send the detail to you !
your timely reply I will so appreciated !
with best regards
shenmengxian:好象现在的开发信 都差不多的哦
motokkx:so sent this letter to you to see whether we can establish good business relationship in the future.
雪中雨:现在就是不知道自己是没说到位,还是怎么回事,邮件发了好长时间,都没人理我!
xiaoweiwendy:
没关系的,多发几次吧,会有回复的,客户展会回去一般都很忙的,所以要一些时间,坚持哦!
雪中雨:谢谢! 坚持了好长时间了!包括免费的网站注册的也有几个,现在都这么长时间了,自己都没有拿到单子!不知道何去何从!
雪中雨:现在自己感觉找不到出路似的,外语水平不高,自己一直怀疑自己是不是自己水平的问题,也是感觉自己说的是不是中国式英语!
公司也没有国际网站,我们主要是通过展会联系,现在给我感触比较深的就是在展会上,一定要积极的介绍产品给来访者,有效的沟通最重要了!
现在自己在努力一次,等待9月份的展会!口语很重要!
希望有经验的外贸同仁,多多指导!
感谢!
文章首发表于:2009-8-7 13:19