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davidzhou2007：this is my room. welcome
am david who is sale manager (in fact here only me in office ,don't laugh),i have so poor english just like you see.
i always forgot the words whichalready remembered the next day or afrer ten minutes,and only half of normal hearing after ten years old.
am happy have a good job , but also fell bad sometimes because the bad achievement.
i am become a father now, i had a beautiful girl last week , i love her very much.
i will try my best to write a letter here every day,i know that is still have many wrong words and phraseological,hope you help me change if fell free.
if you come in, please give me few minutes , i want to be better day after day.help~~~~
if i can't increase my income, my daughter will be lose many,my wife will be kill me , i think!
i want to change, i need more achievenment, fuck the "xdict", nver want to use it again!
2009.11.27

ayumihasa：英语真的很烂，怀疑没过四级，基本无语法。

Ｓue：:o :o :o 不懂想表达什么

川上袜子：我看懂了。我是不是很天才。

jiayuhu1020：标准中国英语，都有一个 I 开头的

anddy2009：我完全能看懂，可能我的英语一样的，哈哈

hiteler：You are a genius！！

mechelltian：your wife will be kill me ,这句错了，你妻子要宰你，不是被动，will=is going to

when：有志气，加油。，，，，，

tangtianfeng：i want to change
幸会！

Kara87：I can understand too ,maybe my Englishis so poor.

haxixi：I suggest you learn grammar from 洪恩在线
The foreigner will not reply your email if he or she don't know what you say !

mechelltian：WILL BE +DONE
will be是将会是
will do是将会做

卢围：你这么有上进心你老婆还要杀你啊

hackloys：
黄冈的？我也是。

juanqiao123：because my poor English, I also can understand what you mean

jojolu：LZ来搞笑的目的达到了，确实很有才。

654579424：
well , I am just a greenhand in international trade .
From what you wrote , I can tell that you are a man has a sense of responsibility because you are caring about your girl and wife, want be better and give them more , it's indeed a signal to the family , god bless you .
Just hoping that you will get great achievement , please don't feel bad any more . Smile ....

沙漠中的仙人掌：David, glad to hear that you had a girl last week, congratuations on it. For English learning problem, just try your best to find out the mistakes you make, and try to correct it. With your effort, i think you can succeed.
For your job, if you work hard every day and always think about the better ways of gaining achievement, i do also believe that you will succeed one day.
That just needs time, so just work hard. Wish your girl happy every day!

roy2009：1楼想说什么呢？完全不明白，估计是乱发的……

梦幻女孩：
看不懂吗？好像懂还是蛮好懂的。

JIANI2008：Come on!
If you are willing to learn english every day ,I believethat you can express yourself cearly.
Believe yourself!

cloudy0210：口语好，比起文笔好要好很多。所以语句通顺就行。

sweetylove：这可以去愚弄下老外.学英语无非就去愚弄下老外,让他们觉得头晕眼花,说不定还觉得自己的英语很烂呢

davidzhou2007：非常感谢楼上众多朋友的支持鼓励与理解！
我试着分析了原因，基本是一种过去固有的习惯造成现在的语法错误，当我静下来认真去看写的东西，也会发现那些浅显的错误！
我会抽时间从基础温习学过的东西！更希望大家能长期指点错误之处！
今天写的被转移到外贸英语了。很久没上fob，不知道这版块不让写英文的！:funk:

longevity：cheers, and come on

小小罗卜头：我跟1楼应该一个样,因为你的内容全看懂了:L :L :L

gongxuemeiyj：小周同志我来看你了。等我出货的时候我去参观你的新办公室
PS：你女儿好可耐哇。怎么不传FOB。哈哈

清水-：CHINGLISH,IT'S FUNNY!
CHINGLISH,IT'S FUNNY!