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liuyonggui：新手上路，老外怎么不给我回信
这是我给老外的询盘信可是总是石沉大海，请各位长辈赐教
Dear shashi

Have nice day for you

This is Sunny
As your require photo frame is our main products. This is our honour.we enclose our new products samples of this
month . hope that is you need.

We would like to introduce our company to you.It's mainly base on a number craft-base production of photo-frame,
jewelry box and case,household storage and watch box ,stationary item.

Our products material's pu leather or customer requirement,best price ,various colors and dimensions are available,
customerized designs and private label are welcome.

We have many years export experience ,so am sure that our products and price will make you satisfied.We will provide
the best service for you.

Our website is being updated and may bring you inconvenience . I fell sorry about that ,but it's doesn't matter,that is
temporary .

If you have any questions or require please feel freeto contact us .Also you can give us some more detailed information.
Thanks for your timeand looking farward your reply.

best regards

2010-04-09
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jackliguangyue：个人觉得好多地方要修改邮件没写什么实质性的内容你是回复询盘还是怎么的
Thank you for your inquiry. 稍微自我介绍下
然后是对自己工厂的概括，自己产品的优势
再写客户需要的产品，可以提供些产品的规格（我一般以附件形式），询问客户的要求
表达自己的立场，以客户为重，希望合作。
结语就可以了
个人意见，仅供参考

liuyonggui：谢谢前辈指导
这是我写的开发信
刚刚接触外贸这个行业，有点摸不着头绪

liuyonggui：
前辈，你觉得哪里需要改呢
我觉得我公司的产品什么的都写了啊

Alex19871227：感觉有点长，没有写到实质性的东西。

liuyonggui：求救！
各位大哥大姐能不能详细的指点一下啊

liuyonggui：新手问路
第一封开发信就要报价吗？

笨笨猪~：LZ做 photo frame 还是digital photo frame .我们做后者

BinaryPoet：太长了
没兴趣看啊。呵呵
你要抓住人的心理

BinaryPoet：改进改进三两句说完
再看看效果

aluay：好啰嗦。太不规范了。

angela-liu：我也觉得不太好，很混乱，然后呢客气话比较多，有用的很少

fishchieftain：好长......

ciel2：有种感觉好像不是很地道，1楼应该好好学下商务英语，个人意见仅供参考！