英语菜鸟的第一单再见雅虎邮箱端午节放假无聊

heairenjia：英语菜鸟的第一单，再见雅虎邮箱
端午节放假无聊，打开了即将退出中国市场的雅虎邮箱，看到了和客户的来往邮件，舍不得丢掉，贴出来和大家分享一下，本人英语比较菜，好多错词错句，还望各位路友理解，废话少说，直接贴邮件。
Sent: Thursday, 27 September 2012, 14:42
Subject: Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx
Have a nice day!

We specialize in pharmaceutical water equipment for 10 years,exporting RO,Multi-effect distilled water machine,pure steam
generator and mixing tank with good quality and low price in Pakistan.

Please contact me if any questions.

Thanks and Regards

Alvin

Yangzhou Lianqiu Purify Equipment Co., LTD
Add: Anyi industrial zone Baoying County Yangzhou City Jiangsu Province,China
Tel: 86-514- 88277733 Mobile: 86-13773565544
Fax: 86-514-88277700
发送日期： 2012年9月27日, 星期四, 下午 11:43
主题: Re: Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear
PLEASE GIVE ME QUOTATION
1=RO WATER PLANT =1000L HOUR
2=DISTEL WATER PLANT 5 COLOM =500L HOUR
3=CLEN STEEM GENERATER 200L HOUR
4=2000L316L JACATED TANK WITH MIXER
THANKS

Sent: Friday, 28 September 2012, 16:12
Subject: 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Have a nice day!

Please check the attachment.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best Regards

Alvin
发送日期： 2012年9月28日, 星期五, 下午 10:41
主题: Re: 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear Alvin
clen steem generator(200L) is electric operated.
YOUR FACTORY NEAR SHANGHAI?

heairenjia：Date: Monday, October 8, 2012 9:35:02 AM GMT+0800
Subject: 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Hope you are fine, my friend.
It is regret that I haven't receive any information from your side. May I have your idea about our offer? We will try to satisfy
you upon receipt of your reply. As we don't want to lost a good customer like you!
If there is anything we can do for you, we shall be more than pleased to do so. Hope we can build good cooperation with
you.
Looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards

Alvin
发送日期： 2012年10月8日, 星期一, 下午 6:56
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Dear 7 to 14 october i am in shanfhai i go back pakistani deside your ofer
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Sent via Nokia Email
Date: Monday, October 15, 2012 9:31:43 AM GMT+0800
Subject: 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

How is everything going?

We are looking forward to getting your suggestion , and we also hope have a chance to establish a mutual benefit business
relationship with you.

Regards

Alvin
发送日期： 2012年10月15日, 星期一, 下午 2:59
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Dear this time i am in bangkok 17 i go back pakistan
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Sent via Nokia Email
Sent: Monday, 15 October 2012, 12:06
Subject: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx
Wish you a smooth journey。

Regards

Alvin
发送日期： 2012年10月19日, 星期五, 下午 1:41
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Dear
PLEASE GIVE ME CNF KARACHI PRICE URJENT
1=AROWATER PLANT 500 LITER HOURLY
2=ARO WATER PLANT 1000 LITER HOURLEY
3=DISTEL WATER PLANT 300 LITER HOURLEY
4=DISTEL WATER PLANT 500 LITER HOURLEY
5=CLEAN STEEM GENERATER 200 LITER HOURLY (ELECTRIC)
6=CLEAN STEEM GENERATER 200 LITER HOURLY (STEEM)
ALL QUOTATION ADD 10% COMITION

I AM INDENTER IN PAKISTAN
Sent: Friday, 19 October 2012, 14:11
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Dear xxxx

Sorry,Prevail in this offer, thank you!

Regards

Alvin
发送日期： 2012年10月19日, 星期五, 下午 10:46
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Dear Alvin
ALL PRICE YOU GIVE ME WITH PLC TOUCH SCREEN
PLEASE GIVE ME WITH OUT PLC TOUCH SCREANPRICE AND GIVE ME YOUR 3CATLOG MACHINES
MY OFFICE ADRESS (此去省略)
Sent: Saturday, 20 October 2012, 12:40
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Dear xxxx
Thank you for your prompt reply, this price contains 10% commission.

Sorry, I just have the electronic version sample.
Welcome you to our factory to talks
Please contact me if any questions!

Best regards

Alvin
发送日期： 2012年10月20日, 星期六, 下午 3:53
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Dear
please give me quotation
200 LITER HOURLEY DISTEL WATER PLANT URJENT
OTHER IMPORTER COMPANY QUOTATION =US$8000 C&F WITH 10% COMITION
PLEASE GIVE ME URJENT QUOTATION
Sent: Saturday, 20 October 2012, 13:22
Subject: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Thank you for calling.

Semi automatic control, qualified and unqualified distilled water distilled water automatic discharge=US$8000 C&F WITH
US$1000 Commission.

Looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards

Alvin
发送日期： 2012年10月20日, 星期六, 下午 4:45
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Dear Alvin
200L DISTEL WATER PLANT FOUR COLUM AND OTHER MANUFACTURE THREE COLUM
FOUR COLOUM IS OK PLEASE YOU DECITED 4 COLOUM OR 3 COLOUM
Sent: Saturday, 20 October 2012, 17:29
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Dear xxxx

200L distilled water plant FOUR COLUMNS.

Energy-saving effect is greater than three columns.

Best Regards

Alvin
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日期: 2012年10月20日,周六,下午9:10
Dear
ok 4 colum
your quotation transfer farma factory thanks
Sent: Thursday, 25 October 2012, 16:11
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Have a nice day!

It is regret that I haven't received any information from your side.

May i know the latest results?

Best Regards
Alvin
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日期: 2012年10月25日,周四,下午9:58
Dear Alvin
this week muslim eid week
next month i inform you thanks
Sent: Tuesday, 6 November 2012, 12:29
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Hope you are fine, my friend. It is regret that I haven't receive any information from your side.

Looking forward to your reply.

Regards

Alvin
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日期: 2012年11月6日,周二,下午4:31
Dear
PLEASE GIVE ME COMPLET DRAWING 500L RO AND 500L DISTEL WATER PLANT URJENT
Sent: Tuesday, 6 November 2012, 13:40
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Please check the attachment

Regards

Alvin

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日期: 2012年11月7日,周三,下午5:07
Dear
YOUR FACTORY NEAR SHANGHAI
I VISIT YOUR FACTORY
Sent: Wednesday, 7 November 2012, 14:11
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Yes. Tell me the exact time and place, I went to pick you up.

Regards

Alvin

heairenjia：主题: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
日期: 2012年11月7日,周三,下午5:18
SHANGHAI TO FACTORY JURNY TIME
Sent: Wednesday, 7 November 2012, 14:25
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
ok.I wait for you.

SHANGHAI TO OUR FACTORYBY BUS 4 HOURS

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日期: 2012年11月8日,周四,下午4:04
Dear
GIVE ME COMPLET FACTORY NAME AND ADRESS
THANKS
Sent: Thursday, 8 November 2012, 13:34
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

COMPANY NAME: Yangzhou Lianqiu Purify Equipment Co., Ltd.

ADDRESS: Anyi industrial zone Baoying County Yangzhou City Jiangsu Province,China
Regards

Alvin
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日期: 2012年11月9日,周五,下午12:54
Dear
GIVE ME COMPLET ONE QUOTATION WITH 10% COMITION
1=R.O WATERPLANT 500 L HOURLY
2=DISTEL WATER PLANT 300L HOURLY
3=CLEN STEEM GENERATER 200L HOUR LY
Sent: Friday, 9 November 2012, 11:13
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Price includes 10% commission.

When will you come to our company?A total of a few?

Regards
Alvin
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日期: 2012年11月9日,周五,下午2:29
Dear
PAKISTAN ALL MACHINE IMPORT L/C AT SIDE 30% ADVANCE 70 % MACHINE COME KARACHI PORT BEFORE RECIVED
BANK TRANSFER PAYMENT THIS SYSTEM L/C AT SIDE
YOU GIVE ME QUOTATIONA WITH PLC TOUCHSCREEN
TOMARO I AM FINAL DECIDE WHAT TYPE MACHINE WITH PLC OR WITH PLC
THANKS
Sent: Friday, 9 November 2012, 13:46
Subject: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
Dear xxxx

Sorry,We insist on payment: 30% T/T in advance deposit for order, left amount should be send before delivery date.

With PLC+SCREEN price in the attachment,please check it.
Regards

Alvin

heairenjia：重要时刻来了，客户做出选择了.......
主题: Re: 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： 回复： Pharmaceutical water equipment
日期: 2012年11月11日,周日,下午3:36
Dear alvin
plc with screen (screen colour type)
please give me performa invice
1=500LR.O WATER PLANT WITH PLC WITH TOUCH SCREEN =US$17500 +1000=US$18,500
2=300L MULTI-EFFECT DISTEL WATER PLANT PLC TOUCH SCREEN =US$13500+1000=US$14,500
3=LC200 PURE STEEM GENERATER PLC WITH TOUCH SCREEN =US$ 8800+1000=US$ 9,800
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COMPLEAT ONE P/I TOTAL =US$ 42,800
FACTORY NAME(此去省略)

关于付款方式和客户纠结了十几天，最后客户同意30%预付，70%信用证。通过一个外贸公司代理出口（这公司和客户合作十多年了)。大年初十下大雪，去接客户来公司看了一番，5月9号货物进仓，6月5日外贸公司把70%的余款汇过来了，回顾这个项目，感觉蛮顺利的，遇到了好客户。现在和客户关系处的不错，5月份又做了一个P/I，就等客户付款了，预祝大家生意兴隆，恭喜发财。

小牙新劲：谢谢1楼分享！

heairenjia：呵呵，不客气，大家一起学习，最近成功开发出一个7万美金的单子，等款子到了在贴出来。

heywaiting：:SE 1楼好厉害呀，你们现在是用的哪个平台呢？

fangyu2013：
问下，后来你雅虎邮箱的邮件都是转发过来的吗？